Elise+Locke

__//Wednesday 18th May 2011//__

__**//Title:The Lost Tiger.//**__

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//Main characters//

//✸Leo the tiger//

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//Leo: Quiet and really confused.//

__**//Setting//**__

In the grassy flax and dry lands.

__**//Story//**__

It was a hot day in the grass of Africa's national park, where a pained leaped gave birth to a young and healthy cub. He was extremely adventures, and at two days old he was gone, lost in depths of the deep and dangerous grass lands. On and on the little cub chased determinedly to catch the butterfly he had been trying to catch for hours. It became dark and he found he didn’t know his way home he was lost.

“Where am I” Leo said, after sniffing around for a while he decided to go for a long walk to find some company. There he saw a bunch of squirrels he wounded if he was one of them so he went over but he didn’t get far as they started throwing nuts at him and cackling at him in mean way. He moved on and after a while he spotted a small pond in the center of the grasslands he wandered over to see if he could find anyone there but as he put his face down to have look the fish started blowing bubbles at him and making him all wet and cold. By now he was feeling really rejected and just wanted to go home but he didn’t know were home was as he was only two days old. Next he decided to go in a different direction as it was he came to a big grey animal with a trunk he had never seen one of these before maybe this is my home but sure enough the large animal started to blow water at him and make him even more wet than he already was. By now he was a mess bruises from the squirrels wet from the fish and now soaked from the elephants. It was now nearly sunset and he hadn't found anybody to keep him company not even a decent place to sleep, He curled up sadly and went to sleep. Leo was lost. When he woke up the next morning Leo was a bit happier than he was last night he decided he would leave early. After coming to a high ridge were he thought it might make a good place for cosy sleep out so he began making a small cosy cave for himself to sleep in but suddenly he heard a loud panting from behind him, some how he had managed to get himself back into the park him and his mother went back to there nice sunny spot and lived happily together

__//Wednesday 18th May 2011//__

__**//Title:The Lost Tiger.//**__

__**//Characters//**__

//Main characters//

//✸Leo the tiger//

__**//Personalities//**__

//Leo: Quiet and really confused.//

__**//Setting//**__

In the grassy flax and dry lands. __**//Story//**__

“Yes”, the zoo manager said in a hard tone voice. She’s defiantly pregnant, “what are we going to do with another cub we are getting far too many of them, we can’t afford to feed and employee people to look after them”, shhhh quiet said the zoo manager said if any of the visitors think something dodgy is going on they might call the cops on us.

I guess we have to do what we have to do said the manager, what asked the zoo assistant you know come to my office and I will explain. So heres the plan we take the pregnant tiger into he own little enclosure were none of the visitors can see her so they just think she’s not there anymore once she has had here cub we will take it away and dump it well into the grass lands so no one will find it.

1 month later the small cub arrives. Meet here five o’clock said the zoo manager you know the plan. five o’clock sharp the two workers arrive and take the cub from it’s enclosure. They loaded the cub up and away they went. A few hours later they arrived deep into the grass lands and dropped the cub off, with no regret they drove back to the zoo.

Where am I Leo said, after sniffing around for a while he decided to go for a long walk to find some company. There he saw a bunch of squirrels he wounded if he was one of them so he went over but he didn’t get far as they started throwing nuts at him and cackling at him in mean way. He moved on and after a while he spotted a small pond in the center of the grasslands he wandered over to see if he could find anyone there but as he put his face down to have look the fish started blowing bubbles at him and making him all wet and cold. By now he was feeling really rejected and just wanted to go home but he didn’t know were home was as he was only two days old. Next he decided to go in a different direction as it was he came to a big grey animal with a trunk he had never seen one of these before maybe this is my home but sure enough the large animal started to blow water at him and make him even more wet than he already was. By now he was a mess bruises from the squirrels wet from the fish and now soaked from the elephants. It was now nearly sunset and he hadn't found anybody to keep him company Leo was lost.

I like your story about the baby tiger and him trying to find a home I did notice that you have not used a lot of comers and follstops and that some of you sentinss don’t mack sense but other from that I like it. ( Victoria )

__**//Title:The Lost Tiger.//**__

__**//Characters//**__

//Main characters//

//✸Leo the tiger//

__**//Personalities//**__

//Leo: Quiet and really confused.//

__**//Setting//**__

In the grassy flax and dry lands. __**//Story//**__

“Yes”, the zoo manager said in a hard tone voice. She’s defiantly pregnant, “what are we going to do with another cub all she does is give birth to deformed cubs that we end up putting down maybe we could let here have it and then put her down in the end she is old anyway

I guess we have to do what we have to do said the manager, what asked the zoo assistant you know come to my office and I will explain. So we will meet here at 5 o’clock

1 month later the small cub arrives. Meet here five o’clock said the zoo manager you know the plan. five o’clock sharp the two workers arrive and take the cub from it’s enclosure. They loaded the cub up and away they went. A few hours later they arrived deep into the grass lands and dropped the cub off, with no regret they drove back to the zoo.

__Monday 16 May 2011__

“Yes”, the zoo manager said in a hard tone voice. She’s defiantly pregnant, “what are we going to do with another cub we are getting far too many of them, we can’t afford to feed and employee people to look after them”, shhhh quiet said the zoo manager said if any of the visitors think something dodgy is going on they might call the cops on us.

I like your story about the baby tiger and him trying to find a home I did notice that you have not used a lot of comers and follstops and that some of you sentinss don’t mack sense but other from that I like it. ( Victoria )