T2+Novel

__Thursday 16th June 2011__

This is what I worked on during writing. It is a pitcher of a dairy to go in the novel. I also went on to the novel but did not write anything as I was reading it and did not get enough time to think of a good sentience.

__**Friday 17th June 2011 **__

This is the change that I made.
====**“Sorry I’m late Mr. Wing, we had to take a detour through the park because of the road works and then the strangest thing happy” Before I could finish my sentence Mr. Wing raised his hand indicating for me to stop talking. Oh no I thought to myself, here comes a weeks detention. Mr. Wing raised one eyebrow and took a step towards me. I could here all the boys **====

===“Sorry I’m late Mr. Wing, we had to take a detour through the park because of the road works and then the strangest thing happened ” Before I could finish my sentence Mr. Wing raised his hand indicating for me to stop talking. Oh no I thought to myself, here comes a weeks detention. Mr. Wing raised one eyebrow and took a step towards me. I could here all the boys===

__Thursday 23rd June 2011__
__I drew A pitcher today of a dog digging a hole for an illustration in our story.__

__Thursday 30th June 2011__

__Tuesday 30th June 2011__

I edited some language.

 our mouths wide open. It was so amazing that this guy from the dairy had

our mouths were wide open. It was so amazing that this guy from the dairy had
__Wednesday 5 July 2011__

I changed some sentences to make sense.

__Tuesday 12th July 2011__

I made a radio add for the book launch.

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